First of all, let me say that this is better than any 3-d work I''ve done!
I love her eyes and hair. Now, if you want people to suggest changes, these are the changes I would make, most of them small:
feet a bit longer
greaves larger at knees
maybe make legs longer proportional to body?
smooth out that angle that shows up on the right side of her waist by raising the bottom of the ribcage
bottom curve of breasts a little more abrupt
indent to show underarms
when her arms are up that high, the curve of her shoulders should be visible
center of shirt collar a bit lower
biceps a bit larger and/or forearms a bit smaller (in diameter)
jaw narrowed slightly
corners of mouth raised slightly.
narrow bridge of nose slightly or darken skin there
eyebrows a little more arched
As usual, feel free to ignore any or all suggestions.
1875 x 2200 zip can be downloaded in our files section (much more detailed): http://EdenEclipse.com
Hi, finally here she is, our protagonist Lieutenant Amber E. Hawk.
Any comments? Don''t like the shape of her nose? I would appreciate your feedback very much. Hopefully we will keep that quality when integrating her into Genesis Classic.
Sincerely,
Beren Baumgartner < alias "§oµlmas+eR" >
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